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09/20/2006 11:20:09 PM |
Focus is getting better here, but regardless, it's a very good shot. Composition, lighting, and mood are all really good. And I definitely prefer the B&W. The color's fine, but the B&W seems to me to match the mood better. |
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09/15/2006 12:29:44 PM |
sorry for not commenting. I thought you and judi were still workin on it. I like the lighting and crop but it does seem OOF. the catchlight in your eye when everything else on that side is black is really cool though. i like that alot. |
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09/15/2006 10:48:32 AM |
The soft focus is cool. nice. |
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09/15/2006 09:44:12 AM |
I like the directional (from the side) lighting on this one. |
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09/14/2006 09:46:48 PM |
Judi's giving out some good pointers. Keep working mate...it's coming together! |
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09/14/2006 09:08:30 PM |
Dude! Getting there!! Listen to Judi, she's smart :) |
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09/14/2006 06:45:27 PM |
Ok...this is getting there...the focus still needs to be on you...make sure when you focus on the teddy the camera is actually focusing on the teddy and not the background. As it looks like it still is. Also remove the catch light in your left eye and use a darker background...throw a black shirt of cloth over your background. |
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