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10/12/2003 07:56:53 AM |
"Critique Club"
This one is very hard to know what to say about it. It has its good as well as bad points. Your focus is really good and the detail is fantastic as you can see the textures.
Problems with the photo are simple, its over exposed, more so on the top center, that bright spot is just very distracting there.
As for meeting the challenge I understand where you were coming from with this photo but at the same time it is very weak and doesn't really represent flight in this photo. Remember not everyone will think outside of the actually discription of the challenge.
Nice effort would love to see this redone with some spot editing done to it to correct the overexposure area. |
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10/05/2003 12:19:31 AM |
| This is not "In Flight" To washed out also IMO. 5 |
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10/04/2003 02:22:21 PM |
| Nice use of thirds. Looks a little bright - maybe a little too much contrasting? I'm not sure if this meets the challenge. |
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10/04/2003 04:31:26 AM |
| Really nice photo....how did you get the nice background? |
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10/03/2003 11:43:49 PM |
| Light seems a bit harsh...neat angle though. |
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10/02/2003 10:05:05 AM |
| I like the shot, but cannot grade high for lack of 'Flight' |
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10/02/2003 01:39:09 AM |
| oohhh very artistic creative and superbly interesting, perfect creative licence for the challenge, not sure if proper exposure would benefit it or not, as it stands I love it, simplicity yet immensely captivating, draws me in and makes me want to really see every aspect of the intrigueing creature, lovely photo indeed |
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10/01/2003 06:28:04 PM |
| I wanted to really, really love this shot. The forewings and front of the head are very nice. The white back seems overexposed to me and the shadows in that area add to the confusion. I'm liking the blue area at the top...may I ask how you did that? (just curious) 7 Rob the Swash |
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10/01/2003 12:45:43 AM |
Only my opinion, but I'd like to have seen this a little darker. Great shot though.
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09/30/2003 12:46:03 PM |
| Err, it is not in flight! |
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09/30/2003 06:10:06 AM |
| Well it really isn't actually in flight is it! I think you will get marked down for that in this challenge. Otherwise a good photo. I like the gradient of the background. |
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09/29/2003 11:15:50 PM |
| Excellant background for this image. Clarity and flat angled view of the subject well done. |
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09/29/2003 04:41:37 PM |
| neat photo...I like the color and texture of it |
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09/29/2003 02:32:27 PM |
'In flight'?
Shame, as this is an interesting picture. 4 |
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09/29/2003 02:27:26 PM |
| I like how unusual this looks - to see the face of a moth, usually you see the wings. I like the gradient in the background. I wonder how it would look a bit darker? The brightness matched the "soft landing" title, but it feel just too bright. |
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09/29/2003 12:45:59 PM |
| Nice photo. I think the lighting is a bit harsh making the top of the moth appear fried..I will say the composition is very good...the shot is interesting to look at. |
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09/29/2003 12:38:43 PM |
| I like the image, but I find the white to be too harsh considering the delicacy of the subject. It also is rather distracting in the image to me - perhaps a different color background could've made the image still pop. |
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09/29/2003 06:36:24 AM |
| Great job, background is superb, angle is great also. |
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