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10/05/2006 04:00:08 PM |
Critique Club Review:
I really enjoy the detail of this photo. Focus and depth of field are very good. It does appear that a little bit of softness is starting to creep in at the lower left. It could be an illusion of the lighting.
The angle of the lighting does a great job of showing the texture of the piece. I small fill light on the bottom would help reduce the harshness but keep the texture.
I like the way the watch goes off the frame also. Too many are circular blobs in the middle of the screen.
I would suggest a thinner border. The details and lines of the watch are fine and somewhat delicate. The border, in comparison, comes across to me as a little heavy.
Overall an excellent photo, I could see this hanging in a shop or gallery.
Very nice job.
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09/28/2006 05:03:59 PM |
| This does not seem like an abstract to me. |
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09/28/2006 07:15:47 AM |
| great macro, but hardly abstract |
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09/26/2006 04:18:11 AM |
| i love that you chose b&w for this! great shot!9 |
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09/25/2006 01:57:19 AM |
| very vintage feel. great focus, love it! |
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