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08/11/2002 08:54:00 PM |
Composition 10
Relation to theme 9
Picture quality 9
Overall 9 |
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08/11/2002 08:59:00 AM |
| This photograph definitely pulls at the heartstrings. It is a beautiful collection of memories. The only thing I would change is to crop just a bit differently to where you can't see the desk drawer, it's a bit distracting. 9 lecalan |
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08/10/2002 01:23:00 PM |
| 'old' composition using old things... interesting did you intend this? |
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08/09/2002 02:51:00 PM |
| Composition is good.Positioning of elements is unnatural, however. |
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08/08/2002 12:58:00 PM |
| The rose is a very nice touch in this image... I would love to see *more* of it in the frame :) good shot... - jmsetzler |
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08/08/2002 07:07:00 AM |
| Someone has the most lovely handwriting. Good arrangement and concept. Very well lit. Excellent shot overall. Well done. |
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08/07/2002 07:47:00 AM |
| A super staged photo. Very moving. |
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08/07/2002 04:27:00 AM |
| Technically great, but for me it looks too staged... The picture does carry a great story and you can't miss the challenge... (6) |
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08/06/2002 02:11:00 PM |
| Excellent photo, detail is sharp, the composition is spot on and most importantly it has a real feeling about it. |
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08/06/2002 11:06:00 AM |
| I find the corner of the wall and the space to the bottom right of the picture distracting. I also think a color other than white for the background would have been an improvement. The pen is also out of place, it looks too modern. Wonderful idea though, I like the way you laid everything out. |
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08/05/2002 08:38:00 PM |
| Real nice. Maybe it would have been better to use an unlined piece of paper and an older model pen. Technically great. I'll give it an 8. |
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08/05/2002 07:35:00 PM |
Great idea. Nice focus and clarity. I like the arrangement of the items, but maybe more effective in a different way. I'm not sure I like the papermate pen. Problem is the table and the white boards or walls - they don't go. Also, I think the white balance is off and the lighting is a bit too much. Perhaps changing the DOF would make this more effective - or a different angle. This is my opinion - not to offend. 5
Ruthann |
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08/05/2002 06:51:00 PM |
Something old. Use your photographic technique to emphasize the age of your subject.
Composition - quite good
Technical Aspects - very good
Meets Challenge - yes
Visual Impact / Originality - high
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08/05/2002 06:41:00 PM |
| Nice Ball point pen..... :-) |
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08/05/2002 02:12:00 PM |
| Very nice idea, but the modern pen really throws it off. The letter hasn't been folded, it seems, and I don't think three-hole punch paper was very prevalent. Cleaning up some of these out of place elements would make this work much better, I think. |
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08/05/2002 10:32:00 AM |
| Excellent. I don't think it get's any better than this. I have had many relatives who fought in WW2, and I have studied it in detail myself. This is as good as any published work of the same style. |
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08/05/2002 10:18:00 AM |
| sorry to say this, but I get a little tired of staged photos like this. I know they have there place though |
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08/05/2002 01:01:00 AM |
| The pen looks too recent...unless they did have ball point pens back then |
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08/05/2002 12:20:00 AM |
i think you should have used yellow old paper and a old fountain pen
that would have been a little better |
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