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Surprise! -- October Snow
Surprise! -- October Snow
JuliBoc


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Morning (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Panasonic DMC-FZ30
Location: Big Bay, Michigan
Date: Oct 12, 2006
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 80
Shutter: 1/400
Galleries: Nature, Seascapes
Date Uploaded: Oct 14, 2006

I love morning. Each morning holds a new surprise. This morning the surprise was dramatic. This is the view from my bedroom window, and I never tire of seeing what the new day offers.

This is almost as it came from the camera. I straightened the horizon a little and removed a small stick that was floating in the river.

Statistics
Place: 63 out of 188
Avg (all users): 5.8374
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 5.7143
Avg (non-participants): 5.9127
Views since voting: 1162
Views during voting: 363
Votes: 203
Comments: 11
Favorites: 0


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02/14/2007 08:17:41 PM
This is so beautiful - I just LOVE the blue, blue sky and then all that snow - SO out of my knowledge base - GRIN!
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10/28/2006 08:09:55 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Beautiful view. Wish I had one like this. :)
There really is nothing wrong with this image - the focus is excellent, the composition works, DOF good for subject, color/tones excellent. Your score and placement reflect that.

For the most part, your composition works. The frame is cut in half by the lake but the trees on the left pull it together to keep it from seeming that way. Excellent use of the trees to accomplish that. The lines of the snow and water lead me into the center of the image - great work in that respect also.

But (don't you hate that word?), to push this image over the top, you need to show the viewer something. Anything. This image tells me nothing really about the photographer so I don't connect with that, and there is nothing that stands out in the image except the pine branches with which I also don't connect. A landscape without a focal point needs something more than just landscape - vibrant colors work as do a more dynamic sky.

This is a good, solid image. And with access to a view like this year round, I can see higher scores in your future. Welcome to DPC!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
10/23/2006 09:21:49 PM
Thanks everyone who commented. This was my first challenge, and very exciting. The comments were both helpful and encouraging. Perhaps if I had emphasized the shadows from the grass, the time of day would have been more evident.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/22/2006 11:24:52 AM
wow. must be nice to see autumn leaves covered with snow..nice photo too. 9 for me.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
10/21/2006 07:33:40 PM
Damn Lake Erie and her lake effect snow!!! Gotta Love Buffalo
  Photographer found comment helpful.
10/19/2006 11:48:38 PM
gorgeous!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
10/19/2006 03:40:50 PM
Beautiful scene, but nothing really says morning. It could have been taken mid-day.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
10/17/2006 10:28:05 AM
Meets Challenge - 2
Lighting/Processing - 2
Composition - 2
Overall Impression - 2
"WOW" factor - 1
Score: 9
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10/16/2006 05:35:45 PM
I like this, just troubled by that branch at the top left. There is nothing to balance it and it therefore becomes a distraction.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
10/16/2006 09:53:34 AM
A very pretty and well-exposed scene, although it certainly could have been taken at any time of the day. It doesn't really scream "morning" to me.
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10/16/2006 12:46:07 AM
I'm from Alabama... what's snow? :)


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