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08/11/2002 11:52:00 PM |
| I'd rather see this without the flashlight. I think the composition could be more appealing if the lantern weren't knocked over. Good background, nice coloring. |
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08/10/2002 08:28:00 PM |
| cool progression...good job |
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08/09/2002 04:20:00 PM |
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08/09/2002 11:59:00 AM |
| better than average technical photo. Something discontinuous about the composition, though. |
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08/08/2002 05:27:00 PM |
| interesting set of lights :) The old oil lantern may have made a great shot by itself... good work :) - jmsetzler |
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08/07/2002 10:10:00 PM |
| I like the contrast between old and new :) |
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08/07/2002 04:25:00 PM |
| Striking and such a wonderful deep black background. Did you clean it up or did you shoot it so wonderfully black to begin with? I like the limited colour scope, everything in golds, yellows and bronzes plus the black. |
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08/07/2002 03:38:00 PM |
| cool set-up. I like the contrast/progress you have shown here. A color other than black may have helped the flashlight show up better, mayber. karmat |
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08/07/2002 03:26:00 PM |
This would have gotten a better score from me without the flashlight. The flash in the glass and at the bottom of the lantern are distracting and makes my eye want to focus there. =7
syamjonimi |
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08/07/2002 07:38:00 AM |
| A good visual contrast with the new and the old together. |
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08/06/2002 09:05:00 AM |
| Nice arrangement of lanterns through the ages. Well done for taking the time to find this collection. Your picture is nicely focussed but lacks detail in the shadow areas. It looks like you've pushed the contrast too far. Overall an excellent shot. |
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08/06/2002 07:13:00 AM |
| It just looks like a jumble of crap. it looks like you just tried to put them as close together as possible and then took a snapshot of it. Try setting thsi up again and moving things around. If the big thing is a lantern why not try standing it up. How about showing the front of the flashlight. At this angle it could be something else. Also, the black flashlight blends into the background. Try doing this on a white background. Also, try coming up with a title. Untitled just doesn't fit. It illustrates a lack of creativity and effort to try and make the best photo you can. -Chariot |
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08/05/2002 09:17:00 PM |
Something old. Use your photographic technique to emphasize the age of your subject.
Composition - quite good. I would like to see it witout the flash light for comparison
Technical Aspects - very good
Meets Challenge - yes
Visual Impact / Originality - high
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08/05/2002 08:17:00 PM |
| might have worked better without adding the newer flashlight. would be cool to use the black background and put a light behind the lantern so that it looks lit |
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08/05/2002 06:21:00 PM |
| You should not (in my opinion) have used the modern torch. It also makes the picture too busy. Lighting is great, in fact, that torch is really my only beef. An old light in the dark would have worked really well... Sorry to sound so negative. (5) |
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08/05/2002 02:16:00 PM |
| I really like this but wish you had kept the plastic out. Great colors and lighting! 8 Lisa |
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08/05/2002 02:09:00 PM |
| I would have liked this better without the flashlight. I think the flashlight took away from the picture. |
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08/05/2002 01:44:00 PM |
| more distance between the elements would help me see each independently and all as a group, I think |
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08/05/2002 01:31:00 PM |
| too dark. objects producing light would be better if dark areas were lighter |
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08/05/2002 02:22:00 AM |
| I would like this better without the flashlight. Also think it needs a title. |
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08/05/2002 01:15:00 AM |
| Nice image. Find the composition distracting though. Some items are barely recognizable and it might have been better using fewer of them or re-arranging them. |
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