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10/20/2008 01:52:16 PM |
I really enjoyed this shot. Not sure how I missed it before this time. |
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11/06/2006 07:47:35 AM |
This was one of my top two picks for the challenge. Congratulations on an excellent shot - difficult composition and lighting situation and you carried it off very well! And for the record, I love the shadow, and I love how it's not all there. |
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11/05/2006 09:00:14 PM |
I think this shot would be improved if the composition allowed for the entire shadow to be seen at the bottom of the frame. |
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11/05/2006 08:15:28 PM |
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11/05/2006 02:25:00 PM |
Very pretty, I love the shadow in the forground |
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11/05/2006 06:43:07 AM |
One of my favourites in this challenge, with the shadow of the kite. |
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11/05/2006 01:49:14 AM |
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11/04/2006 03:39:27 AM |
Nice idea, wish for a complete shadow, and more saturation might help. |
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11/04/2006 12:44:58 AM |
Boys and Kites
The world looks folded in three,
sky on water on white sand.
In the crease run little boys
away from their laughing kites,
the brilliant colors stretched
on a geometric frame.
Capable of flight, prone
to crashes, they are
hard on themselves, rigid, yet
they fall so bravely,
headlong into shore.
A boy running with a frail string
gripped in both hands
knows unhappiness,
feels it bouncing just behind. |
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11/03/2006 05:43:05 PM |
I find the position of the shadow too dominant in the image. I'm not sure it wouldn't have been better if you'd cropped it out. |
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11/03/2006 04:56:01 PM |
nice shot, if the whole of the shadow was in then it would be so mush better |
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11/02/2006 08:53:54 PM |
Great idea, great capture to fulfill that idea. Nicely done on all counts. |
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11/02/2006 04:43:20 PM |
Shame that the whole shadow isn't in the photo |
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11/01/2006 06:32:04 PM |
I'm not sure that the shadow enhances the photograph. I think a landscape crop eliminating the shadow would be just as effective. Nice colors and exposure. |
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10/31/2006 09:37:42 AM |
Hey! This is pretty darn cool. :D I really like the shadow. Good job on finding some unblemished sand! The positioning of the main subjects in your photo work quite well. Good luck in the challenge. |
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10/30/2006 10:33:24 PM |
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10/30/2006 07:52:19 PM |
Certainly shows the effects of winds perfectly. Compositionally,
I wonder if it would have been a stronger image without the foreground shadow. |
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10/30/2006 07:55:31 AM |
I think the bottom area with the shadow is distracting.. but like the top just fine |
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10/30/2006 06:10:16 AM |
nice idea. too bad the shadow is cropped half off. |
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10/30/2006 01:46:27 AM |
Interesting and a very fortunate capture of the shadow. Good luck! |
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