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11/10/2006 06:49:24 AM |
I think I understand what you were doing with this composition -- the nice tree, wall, and post on the left give it the vertical lines for the portrait orientation. It looks to me like you did a good job with the dodge and burn. Short of reshooting the picture from a position closer to the river, to give that a more vertical orientation, I don't know what you could do to improve this. The way it is, I feel frustrated that I can't see past the tree to where the river is going. |
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11/06/2006 12:14:53 PM |
I think you have some bowing from a really wide angle lense, but other than that it is very nice. |
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11/04/2006 08:44:26 PM |
Composition is not right. The coast of the river shall start from the lower right. |
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11/03/2006 04:36:26 PM |
Interesting composition. The lines of the river seem to be in conflict with the implied lines of the wall and foliage on the left. If there was an interesting subject at their intersection this might work, but as it is, my eye just drifts into the empty corner at the top left. |
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11/03/2006 10:57:50 AM |
perspective is a little askew |
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11/01/2006 03:46:06 AM |
Bland with little for the eye to come to rest on. Lighting could have made this so much better - try a dawn walk for photography. The alarm clock is the best piece of equipment a photographer can have |
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