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Kiwi Rays
Kiwi Rays
Faye Pekas


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Challenge: Exposed (Classic Editing)
Camera: Canon PowerShot S50
Location: Oregon
Date: Oct 12, 2003
Galleries: Nature, Macro
Date Uploaded: Oct 12, 2003

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Statistics
Place: 27 out of 110
Avg (all users): 5.8819
Avg (commenters): 7.2500
Avg (participants): 5.7397
Avg (non-participants): 6.0282
Views since voting: 990
Votes: 144
Comments: 16
Favorites: 0


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10/19/2003 06:50:21 PM
Good lighting and focus!
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10/18/2003 07:44:09 PM
This is really nice. Composition is attractive. I like the soft shadows and white background. Great shot! 10
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10/16/2003 05:36:07 PM
My daughter's favorite fruit! She's drooling over my shoulder! :)

Lovely idea, great composition, cropping is well done but the shot seems just a bit bright, maybe a different background or softer lighting? I'm starting this one at an 8
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10/16/2003 09:57:36 AM
Very good studio shot, looks like something I'd find in a supermarket brochure or stock photography catalogue. The lighting is very fitting and the set up also bang on. I can't almost taste the juiciness of this kiwi fruit. The crop on the left side is very borderline, almost a tad too much.
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10/15/2003 08:52:11 AM
Nice composition, but the large uncovered spaces at the right are a bit disturbing. I think it would have been OK to crop a little tighter on that side. The loss of part of that right-hand slice might even strengthen the overall effect (I put a piece of paper over my computer screen, and I think it was an improvement). The lighting and captuere of the texture are great.
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10/14/2003 04:21:23 PM
Good lighting and color. Very well composed image. A favorite for this challenge. 7

Message edited by author 2003-10-20 19:51:33.
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10/14/2003 12:02:41 PM
Good composition here but the uneven yellow gradients on the background look at bit odd. Some of that yellow may be from the bleeding into the green of the kiwi fruit. Maybe some white balance adjustments or software color correction would help here.
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10/14/2003 08:06:50 AM
nice composition, light (except for the small light spot on far left of fruit, nice to capture the rays
10/13/2003 09:38:56 PM
nice
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10/13/2003 08:53:50 PM
Good composition. Good focus. Background lacks something. Maybe to warm or not warm enough. Might not have been as noticable without the white border pulling my attention to it.
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10/13/2003 03:02:42 PM
Pretty shot. I think you did pretty good with the light and composition.
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10/13/2003 02:23:20 PM
Very nicely done. Great exposure, nice composition and natural looking color.
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10/13/2003 01:37:04 PM
Nice fruit shot - well composed with good lighting but contrast could do with a boost.

Otherwise challenge well met.
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10/13/2003 03:50:37 AM
Good points: I like the highlights on the kiwis
Bad points: It's not very exciting to me
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10/13/2003 02:31:28 AM
Simple, crisp, the kiwi is very defined, you've even captured the juicy nature of the fruit. The lighting is a teeny bit harsh in the top left hand corner, near the top of the uncut kiwi - kind of a slight glare to me, but I don't think it detracts, I did notice it though. Very well done. 8
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10/13/2003 12:12:00 AM
Beautiful!! Colors are wonderful and vibrant! :)
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