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11/07/2006 11:51:02 AM |
| I think this would work a lot better if she was taken away from the centre of the frame. |
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11/04/2006 07:57:33 PM |
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11/03/2006 09:05:39 PM |
| Redhead, red bricks...nice. |
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11/03/2006 02:27:15 PM |
| No doubt she has somone's heart all "sewn up!" :) |
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11/03/2006 09:37:35 AM |
| composition is too centered, might have been better if she was leaning at the door, crop at bottom is too close to her coat |
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11/02/2006 09:11:04 AM |
| If you got in closer this would have been much better. |
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11/02/2006 06:54:54 AM |
| compositionally I would have preferred a 'rule of thirds' approach...I don't want to be critical, but her expression looks like she is ticked off |
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11/02/2006 12:25:09 AM |
tighter crop next time. utilize either the door or the wall, but using both creates a cluttered and distracting background. the graffiti on the wall begs for a grunge treatment here, which in itself wouldn't have worked due to her wardrobe. the gold of the jacket and the red of the wall do not work well together...b+w might have been able to resolve that problem. lighting is flat...just a bit of light on her face will make a huge difference.
none of that means it's a poor shot...this locale and certainly this model have potential. |
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11/01/2006 01:02:19 PM |
| I like the contrast, lighting and pose. However, I am not sure what the Landscape format gives you but dead space... |
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