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Challenge: Shadows II (Classic Editing)
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Location: Pasadena, CA
Date: Oct 20, 2003
Aperture: 1:2.4
ISO: Auto
Shutter: 1/60 Sec
Galleries: Action, Studio
Date Uploaded: Oct 21, 2003

I took this photo on my dinner table using a desklamp, 3 mini flourescents and 2 flashlights. The background is the front of my air conditioner. The smoke is from incense.

Statistics
Place: 116 out of 126
Avg (all users): 4.2857
Avg (commenters): 5.6000
Avg (participants): 4.0789
Avg (non-participants): 4.5614
Views since voting: 983
Votes: 133
Comments: 6
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11/05/2003 01:09:20 AM
*critique club*

Starting from you final score, I think that you'll realise that you got hammered for being considered off-topic. 'Shadows' and 'low key' have different meanings in photography. 'Low key' refers to a photo where the overall colour range is dark, like in your entry, sometimes created by shadow regions, sometimes not.

Leaving that aside, there is another reason why you got hammered in the voting - DPC tends not to favour challenging images, as yours is. By 'challenging', I mean images whose meaning is not immediately apparent, including abstracts, and images that are even slightly uncomfortable or grotesque.

Photographically, your intention could have been reinforced by reducing the clutter around the object, by making the ice-breath more obvious through a repositioning of the camera angle and by adding more light to the head area to clarify the object.

Best wishes,

Jim
 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/31/2003 12:43:10 AM
awesome lighting...
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10/30/2003 04:12:37 PM
7.
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10/29/2003 01:41:48 AM
I know the challenge is about shadows, but I can't really tell what this is.
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10/28/2003 07:18:46 PM
8. Good clean focus on subject.
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10/27/2003 09:46:19 AM
The 'mother'!!! Yikes just to see that mouth is creepy. Cool light.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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