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12/10/2006 02:01:04 AM |
I did not give this a high score because of multiple things. I think that the background is distracting. The composition does not draw my eye towards the subject. The way that the background and the fur look makes the image seem a bit pixelated, so a different choice of background would have helped for that reason as well. Basically with the subject matter being what it is, it needs a good artistic treatment to be visually appealing as a photo.
edit: I want to add that when I first commented on this picture I assumed it to be something you found and did not want to "rearrange" for photography purposes. So I said about different choice of background but I should also have added a couple other ideas. one might be to take a picture much closer, assuming you can get good macro shots out of your camera. so that there is less background - maybe even only a part of the mouse/rat as well. Another thing you could have done is put your camera on the ground and shot towards the animal. Depending on what surrounded you, you might have been ab le to get a nice, more solid background, maybe even some bokeh (see previous bokeh challenges). |
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12/07/2006 08:41:40 PM |
dude. this isnt very creative.
sorry, but its just a dead rat. |
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12/07/2006 03:35:49 PM |
| hmm, yuk, this is too confronting. maybe if you used a different point of view, it could've been something. quality of the photo isn't great either. |
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12/07/2006 03:18:47 PM |
Technicals: looks noisy, but I'm not sure if that's what I'm really seeing. The problem is it's color noise and that has far fewer applcations to a nice feel as monochrome noise (ie. grain). Composition is static. What about a diagonal composition?
Feel: captures death, but does not capture my attention.
Score: 4 |
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12/06/2006 02:42:58 AM |
| Great atmosphere. colors are nice to. |
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