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12/21/2006 11:17:02 AM |
Thanks a bunch for the critique Dr.Confuser it is much appreciated and I actually got a lot from it :)
-dave |
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12/20/2006 08:42:22 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club! I have been assigned your photo to critique and here are my thoughts:
Personal Reaction: Congratulations on your first challenge entry! You’re off to a good start. I liked the photo right away when I saw it but I think it could be improved with a few simple changes.
Composition: The composition is fine but if I were editing it I would crop it a little tighter. I would crop out the diagonal tub line at the bottom, and the tub artifact mid frame on the left. They are a little distracting. To balance the photo, I might then have to crop a little off the top. The result would be a tighter image with your subject filling more of it.
Technicals: Technical execution is fine. You might want to try slightly more contrast to add shape to the boy’s back. And you might like the result if you soften some of the reflections on the shower walls.
Overall: Although I didn’t vote this challenge, I would have given this photo a score a bit higher than it’s average.
As always, these are my personal observations. Feel free to PM me if you’d like further dialog about the photo or my critique.
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12/20/2006 02:35:06 PM |
| I think this is really underrated. This photo is gonna be appreciated much more down the line than many others. |
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12/19/2006 01:46:05 PM |
Originally posted by DrAchoo:
Heh, I snickered when I saw this one in the thumbs. A cute little bum shot. I think I would have added waaaay more bubbles just to make it more interesting and then kept it in color. 6 |
well then, I'm so glad that you didn't take the picture!! hahaha |
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12/18/2006 12:09:02 AM |
Thanks for the great comments to everyone, Im pretty happy for my first challenge.
Just to clear something up, justamistere:
I had blackmail not blackmale in the title ;) it was meant to sound like a blackmail pic for when my son gets older kinda thing where I can show his girlfriend his younger artistic years...
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12/17/2006 11:45:37 AM |
| A very good family album material |
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12/13/2006 10:08:38 PM |
| Looks like a white male to me, (maybe), but I get the scandelous concept. |
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12/13/2006 10:42:49 AM |
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12/12/2006 11:59:19 PM |
| The boy himself seems to be composed of squiggles. A priceless photo. 10 |
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12/12/2006 05:36:30 PM |
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12/11/2006 08:29:09 PM |
| So you blackmailed the kid to let you take pictures by letting him (her?) doodle on your walls? Neat. Good candid. ~7 |
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12/11/2006 06:58:45 PM |
| Heh, I snickered when I saw this one in the thumbs. A cute little bum shot. I think I would have added waaaay more bubbles just to make it more interesting and then kept it in color. 6 |
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12/11/2006 01:34:56 PM |
| Hehehehehe... great shot! I can easily picture my own son behaving like this in a few years. |
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12/11/2006 06:49:18 AM |
| very nice shot. well toned and composed. i'm not sure if it woud have been improved with straightening. those bath crayons are great, aren't they? |
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12/11/2006 05:37:58 AM |
| :) now thats a lot of work. Excellent lighting. would be happy to know more on this. |
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