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Camera: Fujifilm FinePix 3800
Date: Jul 13, 2003
Galleries: Nature, Floral
Date Uploaded: Oct 24, 2003

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 03/16/2004 02:47:22 PM
I agree with Gordon to some extent but I really like this picture! It reminds me of a bedtime story book I used to have.
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 10/24/2003 05:38:04 PM
Looks good.

There are a few things you could do to improve it a bit though -
The cut off petals on the left edge jump out of nowhere - it would have been better to frame it without cutting them off, but you could crop them out now ?

Same with some of the bright white petals hidden behind the leaves (e.g., middle left of the frame) You can darken these up in photoshop to make them less apparent if you want to work on it more.

Might also be worth removing the marks on the coneflower petals on the bottom right - they break up the white petals a bit distractingly.


Otherwise - a good shot - the bee is very central - which commands all the attention in the composition, even though all the cones and lines point out towards the top right. I'd crop it square from the right edge and I think you'd have a much strong composition - losing the distractions on the left and framing things more evenly.
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