Your use of the clone-tool is beyond the pale ... er, no, hang on. I would wish for a little more from this - though what, I don't quite know - it's a nice moment captured, and intriguing - especially the near-absolute repetition of forms, but somehow it's not properly emphasised in your image. I don't know: black and white, perhaps? Allow us to get away from the muted winter colours and the horses' own colour and concentrate on the forms more? Perhaps some more contrast work would achieve the same effect? Or simply a darkening overall, but really, anything to devote more of the attention to those parallel forms, and less to the overall environment - perhaps those greens in the background also draw the eye, and deflect from the real point of this? |