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12/30/2006 09:20:19 AM |
| First of all, nice looking lady :) Well lighting is pretty good, composition too and well pretty much nothing that I can see wrong with this shot except for one big issue, and that is the focus lying slightly in front of her eyes so they are a bit out of focus, take better care when focusing at 1.8 aperture and you should be all set. Also I personally would have used a higher contrast in post processing but that´s just my taste. |
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12/27/2006 03:50:50 AM |
| Your wife is gorgeous! Great model, so good job marrying her :-) I think you got great comments below. Personally, I like the pose a lot and as mentioned below, the makeup is great. You are doing so well for just starting out!! |
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12/26/2006 05:09:20 PM |
| Nice composition and tones. Might have been a bit improved by a bit more sharpness around the eyes. |
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12/26/2006 02:22:35 PM |
| My only problems with this photo is you focused on your subjects lips, not their eyes, and that also made you hand oversaturated with light. |
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12/26/2006 01:28:35 PM |
| I love hats and pretty women. I would prefer a little less light. |
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12/26/2006 08:17:19 AM |
| the eyes, not the hands should be in the sharpest focus, but i give you a 6 anyway. nice pose, well lit. watch showing too much of the flat side of the hand, makes it too big. i would have tried having her leaning into the photo, not BACK from the photo...IMO |
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12/23/2006 11:55:59 PM |
Nice portrait. I like the tone and close crop.
One comment is that the sharpest focus appears to be on her lips/nose, as opposed to her eyes. But that's a common mistake. |
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12/21/2006 05:02:11 PM |
| I find the hand distracting and focus seems sharp on her lips rather than her eyes... |
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12/21/2006 03:57:30 PM |
| Good lighting, except for the burned-out parts on her hand. The use of brown is excellent, especially the eyes. |
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12/21/2006 11:29:07 AM |
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12/21/2006 07:22:52 AM |
| Great portrait, I like the way the makeup colors compliment the overall color theme |
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12/21/2006 07:02:31 AM |
| It looks like her lips are more in focus than her eyes. I think this would look much crisper if her eyes were in focus. It is a very nice photo though. |
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12/21/2006 04:35:57 AM |
| definately has potential but would have liked the focus on the eyes. |
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12/20/2006 12:47:18 PM |
| I wish her hand was not in the picture..it distracts your focus |
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12/20/2006 12:13:52 PM |
| awesome model! great photo! |
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12/20/2006 11:56:04 AM |
| nice shot ... wish it was sharper |
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