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01/02/2007 10:14:26 AM |
:::Critique Club Here:::
First Impression: Just couldnt figure our what it was at first. Slowly started making sense some kind of chest or travel bag. The wow factor was not there though. (4)
Technical: Composition is just too centered. I understand the section you were trying to show but I think a different angle could haver really changed that. Also would have eliminated the hotspot caused by the flash on the left side by the rivets. (4)
Appeal: Once again there was'nt the wow effect. Very difficult to add the wow the effect in a photograph like this but using maybe a different angle with a closer crop could have added a little more to the overall appeal by involving the texture of the chest, handle, and handle rivets. (4)
Challenge: Meets the challenge or brown since there are difinetly various shades of brown within the photograph. (10)
Title: The title helped understand what the photograph was conveying about the old chest (10)
Overall: (6) Some areas of improvement and thats what learning is all about. (What do they say "everyone is a critic")
Hiral Patel |
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12/26/2006 02:58:34 PM |
Very nice detail, great lighting and super cool tone. 8 |
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12/26/2006 10:55:16 AM |
Love the cracks and aging on the trunk, it shows that there are actually "memories" to be had here... I am curious to know where that ticket was to! |
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12/26/2006 07:47:15 AM |
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12/25/2006 02:39:53 PM |
Great! Would be a 10 if the reflection on the left side weren't so harsh. |
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12/25/2006 01:28:26 PM |
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12/23/2006 07:01:46 PM |
This is way frustrating for me, I mean the Ideas is SIMPLY FAB but you exicution ruined it. Keep you creativeness but step the techie suff up a notch |
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12/21/2006 04:59:38 AM |
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12/21/2006 04:38:44 AM |
Nice. A shame of the reflection of the flash on the left. |
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12/20/2006 05:17:27 PM |
great idea... good picture... |
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