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12/26/2006 08:20:23 AM |
| Terrific. The red in conjunction with the DOF and frame really make for an interesting image. I love the shadow and movement as well. |
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12/26/2006 08:19:13 AM |
Composition-wise, he's standing on a strong line in a photo, at a thirds and you indeed us the other two-thirds good by accommodating his look towards the ground. It's a shame the foot is not on it, because that is kinda painful to watch.
Lightwise.. this is where i personally feel it doesn't all work out for the best. A human tends to look at the whitest parts first and here that is the out of focus shoulder down to the legs. The part that needs to get the attention, the face, is out of the light and as such doesn't attract the attention it should.
The focus on the contrary is dead on. The face is sharp, sadly enough the attraction-getting of this dof, is lost by the white glow on the other parts of the body.
So you have two strong elements, composition and dof, but to my personal feeling a lot is lost because of the light.
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