| The foreground posts kind of confuse the composition - though i can see your thinking with the road. There's a strange lack of clarity to the whole presentation - slightly noisy, and lacking real fine detail: that could be a number of things, like under-exposure, simple lack of resolution, processing problems. The shot overall, I think, could do with more punch in the tonality - taking the bright points further towards white, whereas they tend to grey here. Also, the house is perhaps too far out of frame for a strong composition, feeling a bit crowded toward the right edge. It has potential I'd say, but i don't think you've really managed to bring it out. |
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