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01/13/2007 09:04:25 AM |
| Eyes seem hollow, not sure where the lighting was. |
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01/13/2007 12:05:42 AM |
| Hmm... looks like you had a great model to work with, but the photo comes up short IMO in a few areas. Most of the values are pure black or white, with relatively few midtones, so it creates a harsh appearance on a model with a soft expression. The centered composition seems static and doesn't direct attention... most viewers will look at the face first and the follow the eyes immediately out of the photo. The graphics on the shirt don't help either. Imagine the same shot with a different shirt, softer lighting (like a big window on an overcast day), and cropped with more room off to the left. THAT would be a good score. As-is, it's about a 5 from me. |
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01/11/2007 03:58:16 PM |
| How would this look cropped a bit? I tried viewing this with the top cropped down & thought that was beneficial. What do you think? |
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01/11/2007 07:51:08 AM |
| This could have been a nice picture, but you either over-edited it, or used a bad compression method. What a waste of your pretty model. (5) |
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01/11/2007 12:45:39 AM |
| slightly OOF, she has a nice expression. |
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01/10/2007 04:50:01 PM |
| Distracting background. Was that your couch? |
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01/10/2007 01:12:28 PM |
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