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01/17/2007 07:53:32 PM |
From the Critique Club
How are you doing today? I am going to touch on a few items with your image.
Colour;
This image has mostly grays, with a peek of rust colour on the chpped edges of the wieght. There is also a touch of blue in the light which makes me think this was done with natural lighting.
DOF/Focus;
I think the DOF is find for this image. However, the focus to me seems a bit soft. Personaly I would like to see the focus a bit sharper, and that can be done by adding a touch more contrast between the lights and darks of the image. Or with Unsharp Mask tools.
Post;
This image does look straight from the camera. I think it would have added this image to give it a couple tweeks in an editor program. A bit adjustments with black levels and contrasts mostly. Also, this might have worked well as a Black/White image. You might try that and adjust the levels a bit to get a really dynamic POP! out of the numbers.
Off Items;
The image does seem a bit flat, and also a bit soft in focus. fixes are like I said above.
Other;
I do think this is a good idea, and I like this composition. If you have any questions about my comments feel free to message me.
Nice Job
Andrew 'littlegett' |
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01/14/2007 08:31:59 PM |
| needs more contrast, but it's a good idea. |
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01/13/2007 11:27:08 PM |
| Nice perspective on this - might have cropped it a little differently. 5 |
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01/10/2007 06:28:40 AM |
| Ha! 5 or 10 ... tempting fate? |
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01/08/2007 03:06:58 PM |
| When you get around to it, would you lift some for me too? Nice. |
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01/08/2007 09:50:43 AM |
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01/08/2007 01:37:07 AM |
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01/08/2007 01:21:10 AM |
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