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Challenge: Black and White Portrait II (Advanced Editing V*)
Camera: Olympus MJU 600
Date: Jan 8, 2007
Date Uploaded: Jan 8, 2007

My little brother trym in a tree:)

Statistics
Place: 461 out of 491
Avg (all users): 4.0722
Avg (commenters): 4.0000
Avg (participants): 3.9187
Avg (non-participants): 4.1948
Views since voting: 714
Views during voting: 361
Votes: 277
Comments: 17
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/16/2007 11:14:06 AM
What a cute little boy. I would have liked the portrait better if his face would have been entirely in sunlight but I know how hard it can be to pose little ones.
01/14/2007 11:34:19 PM
What an adorable little model you have! To me, a portrait is all about the eyes... you want them to be in as sharp a focus as possible & the face is a little soft here. The tree provides a great setting, but the doppled shadows are distracting. It would look better if you could use a diffuser (a white sheet, perhaps) to block the sun and cause less shadowing. Also, you want to look for things like your shadow in the bottom right corner - next time, if you see your shadow, move your body or change your perspective until your shadow is no longer there. Hope these help a little!
01/14/2007 08:55:09 PM
I like his smile and the setting....just don't care for the blurred face
01/12/2007 11:46:13 PM
You have a cute subject hidden in the shadows of the tree. Plus I can see the photographer's shadow. Because you have too many things detracting from the subject, I gave you a 4.
01/11/2007 03:12:28 AM
Competition on this contest is fierce and I have seen a lot of professionally well done shots, which this one clearly lacks (needs sharpness, focus, etc). I reluctantly give it a 5 for good effort.
01/11/2007 03:05:07 AM
What a cutie. Unfortunately, the shadows on his face take away from the focus and make it hard to see him. Without the shadows this would have been a great picture. I can't wait to see more of this little guy.
01/11/2007 01:03:34 AM
Too much shadow on the face. It could be sharper as well.
01/10/2007 05:32:10 PM
to many shadows
01/10/2007 04:51:05 PM
Harsh shadows on the cute boy's face. OOF as well.
01/10/2007 04:50:02 PM
Ok, there is a raging debte about people's voting habits at the moment, so i will attempt to give a detailed comment with my vote:

fist thing i notice: out of focus! Needs to be sharp here.

Fun natural lighitng though and the capture is nice. good pose wit the trees on the branch. The photo should be bigger. akways take advantage of the 640 or 720 pixels! small photos don't ever win or do very well. ever. because of the lack of focus i haveto bump down to 5 :( sry.
01/10/2007 04:36:10 PM
too many shadows
01/10/2007 03:37:14 PM
OOF
01/10/2007 01:55:28 PM
Bad lighting. The head which is your focus in a portrit is partially shaded.
01/10/2007 12:54:04 PM
Too many shadows.
01/10/2007 09:32:29 AM
I am not crazy about the shadow on his face
01/10/2007 07:19:59 AM
cute kid - too bad his face is mostly in the shadows
01/10/2007 12:16:55 AM
Could use some sharpness.


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