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"Unwritten"
"Unwritten"
moswyn


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Song Titles, 2006 (Advanced Editing V*)
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM
Location: Studio
Date: Jan 3, 2007
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/160
Galleries: Portraiture, Children
Date Uploaded: Jan 8, 2007

"Unwritten"

I am unwritten, can't read my mind, I'm undefined.
I'm just beginning, the pen's in my hand, ending unplanned.

Staring at the blank page before you,
Open up the dirty window,
Let the sun illuminate the words that you could not find.

Reaching for something in the distance,
So close you can almost taste it,
Release your inhibitions.
Feel the rain on your skin.
No one else can feel it for you,
Only you can let it in.
No one else, no one else,
Can speak the words on your lips
Drench yourself in words unspoken,
Live your life with arms wide open.
Today is where your book begins
The rest is still unwritten.

Statistics
Place: 42 out of 219
Avg (all users): 6.0421
Avg (commenters): 7.8000
Avg (participants): 5.6429
Avg (non-participants): 6.2090
Views since voting: 946
Views during voting: 419
Votes: 285
Comments: 11
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/16/2007 11:47:05 PM
Great interpretation!
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01/14/2007 10:22:14 PM
That's what I thought when my daughter was born. But I found out she was fully composed, and I was just the conductor.

This is a beautiful image of a beautiful subject!!!
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01/13/2007 04:13:24 AM
Very sweet
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01/12/2007 05:27:49 AM
OMG - where are her legs! Oh, the must just be lost under that dress. I dunno, the dark background with the pink dress and angelic face just don't work for me. Needed to be more high-key maybe.
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01/10/2007 11:44:37 PM
jeesh... ver nice.
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01/10/2007 10:08:53 PM
so so prescious...
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01/10/2007 02:25:06 PM
LOVE the portrait! Woulda picked a different title though - "Because of You" or "You're Beautiful"? No ding for it though. :)
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01/10/2007 08:32:59 AM
cute
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01/10/2007 12:45:48 AM
Perfect.
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01/10/2007 12:24:30 AM
perfection...love the composition and that little hand in the mouth 10
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01/10/2007 12:15:11 AM
Nice shot. 6 because I can't connect it to "Unwritten".
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