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11/15/2003 01:03:59 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi Jason...
Your photo meets the challenge well in my opinion. The repeating patterns of the pilings seem to have no end. I particularly like the bit of fog that is present on the surface of the water. That adds an interesting element of mystery to the image. In general, I enjoy photos where the 'gemoetries' make up the strength of the image.
My interest in this particular photo fades away rather quickly because of the lighting. This scene has a lot of contrast and no primary point of interest. It is, entirely, a shapes and patterns theme more than anything else. I think there may be a strong photo waiting for you in this scene if you can find it :) If I may, I would suggest some rotation of the view to strengthen the diagonal theme as well. |
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11/09/2003 06:11:27 PM |
| Interesting capture. A little dark at the top though. |
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11/06/2003 10:32:30 PM |
| I like the idea,,,,a bit too dark. I think if you could see back under the pier a little more, this would do better. |
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11/06/2003 08:22:30 AM |
| Good capture. The crop is effective. The title is too long. |
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11/04/2003 08:23:41 PM |
| I get what you're going for here, but it doesn't feel very infinite to me. The photo composition is outstanding though, the water is soft, and the support beams are all very crisp. the shadows are outstanding, and i like the angle you shot this from. hmmmm, 9 |
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11/03/2003 01:05:39 PM |
| nice use of lines and shapes to form a repeating theme... |
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