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01/16/2007 08:02:14 PM |
| Interesting concept, but very dark image. |
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01/13/2007 09:37:29 AM |
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01/12/2007 08:28:09 PM |
| You started at the beginning because it's not written yet, am i right? I'm pretty sure that's what you are trying to get across... |
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01/12/2007 01:32:35 PM |
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01/11/2007 07:37:16 PM |
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01/11/2007 12:17:36 PM |
| Very clever. Didn't I see those hands earlier in the challenge? |
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01/11/2007 10:34:57 AM |
| The tone is off. There are no real highlights in the photo. If you'd increased the exposure, or increased the strength of the lighting you would have gotten far more contrast that would have made the photo more appealing, rather than dark and drab. |
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01/11/2007 09:31:10 AM |
Something doesn't quite fit telling this story...maybe it's the pencil being back at the beginning of the sentence on the paper? The proper writing position of the hand? The lighting comes across as dark, emotive, broody (is that a word?). Perhaps if the pencil was broken and splintered with the hand nearby clenched in a fist? I'm wondering also about the area in the upper left. Haven't decided if it's right, wrong, or indifferent. All I know is I've noticed it and it pulls the eye out of the center of the frame.
All of the above is JMO of course. :D Best of luck to you in the challenge. |
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01/10/2007 04:51:17 PM |
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01/10/2007 01:21:52 PM |
| Clever idea, and nicely lit. 6 |
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01/10/2007 12:37:07 PM |
| clever idea - I think it's too dark around the hand for me. Still gets a vote though :) |
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01/10/2007 09:27:26 AM |
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01/10/2007 05:14:23 AM |
| Great concept - I'd like a stronger focus. |
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