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01/17/2007 01:02:55 AM |
Hi Danielle,
Lovely shot - the perspective works well. The real strength here is the calm of the women with the lines leading to the hand and face. What muckpond said - the motion blur really draws the eye in, and then doesn't give the viewer anythign to be interested in. I think you have struggled with the colour depth with the bright guitar and dark face - difficult to make a balanced exposure on that range. |
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01/14/2007 08:06:53 PM |
| this has great perspective, but the hand in the foreground is too prominent. and the motion blur ruins the calm of the shot. |
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01/13/2007 07:10:25 PM |
| It's nice but it is not clear who or what is your main subject. The guitar is nicely lit but her is too dark, the harsh light in her hand is a bit distracting. |
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01/13/2007 08:48:46 AM |
| As a "portrait", I think it needs more light on the face instead of the hand. Great idea. |
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01/12/2007 02:22:55 PM |
| ...a great look and original idea...a little more light on her face would give it more interest and detail. |
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01/12/2007 12:40:49 AM |
| great angle! the lighting is a bit unfortunate but nice shot none the less |
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01/11/2007 08:06:18 AM |
| Too much of the guitar and the hand in my opinion |
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01/11/2007 02:01:33 AM |
| People (including me) look to the brightest part of a photo.. it is natural. Here you see that that leads to the hand and not her face. I really do like your idea of letting the guitar leading you up to the face, but light should support this and not work against it in my opinion. vote=5 |
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01/10/2007 02:58:29 PM |
| The big hand hanging there out of focus is a distraction for an otherwise beautiful shot. |
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01/10/2007 01:39:30 PM |
| Cool perspective. I like the smooth shading. |
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01/10/2007 10:50:28 AM |
| Great use of slow shutter!8! |
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01/10/2007 05:59:18 AM |
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01/10/2007 01:34:16 AM |
| a shot of just the hand on the strings would have worked really well here.. |
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