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07/01/2004 12:29:15 AM |
Excellent lighting. Makes me want to buy a wooden man. The pose is interesting. Only suggestion is to work on the grape and try to make it "glow" a little more (maybe brighten it with more back lighting?) |
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06/30/2004 11:26:53 PM |
I really like the lighting in this one. The black background works well here and I like how you've left some black space on the right side a bit. |
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06/30/2004 10:29:23 PM |
This is very well lit. Good one. |
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06/30/2004 10:02:04 PM |
Steve, This is a very well composed and the lighting is great, the color of the grape is so realistic, Nice work. |
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06/30/2004 09:28:20 PM |
I just got one of those and I'm dying to recreate some of my favorite shots from DPC...this one included. Lighting is awesome! :o) |
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06/30/2004 09:21:34 PM |
Nice solid bg, excellent lighting. |
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12/01/2003 12:33:14 AM |
my two favorite things in this world:
the colors and lighting of your photo. |
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11/18/2003 03:59:39 PM |
Greetings from one of the new members to the critique club.
While your subjects are somewhat ordinary you have managed with good lighting and and composition to create a photo that is enjoyable,emotional and thought provoking. I find myself asking, "Why would this (non-eating) figure be interested to hold a grape so carefully and feel remorse that there are no more. You have created a balance with not only the grape between the hands but enduced an emotion between 2 inanimate objects, with the composition(and a little help from the title). The black background helps to pull your shot together and serves to leave out any distracting elements.
Hope this helps, I am new at this. |
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11/11/2003 11:32:38 PM |
Great focus and light on your manny |
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11/10/2003 07:41:03 PM |
Funny and actually really good in terms of design elements. |
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11/10/2003 03:09:02 PM |
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11/10/2003 08:47:07 AM |
charming, very modern still life |
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11/08/2003 03:05:33 AM |
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11/07/2003 10:50:36 AM |
Very good sharpness and lighting. Well done. |
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11/06/2003 03:23:42 PM |
great shot! But I've seen this shot before with a marble. I liked that one too. |
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11/05/2003 02:23:18 PM |
reminds me to much of jmsetzler's "in the beginning". |
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11/05/2003 11:23:18 AM |
hey, are we related?
j/k...I have the other wooden person :) |
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11/05/2003 09:48:22 AM |
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11/05/2003 01:33:40 AM |
If you put this guy in a costume and drew eyes on the grape you could say it's the executioner mourning or something...sorry, morbid thought, it's passed now. I like this because, despite no eyes, the model had a reverent type posture, almost philosophical. Good shot. |
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