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My Little Brother
My Little Brother
erl89end


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Entrance (Basic Editing)
Camera: Olympus MJU 600
Date: Jan 17, 2007
Date Uploaded: Jan 17, 2007

my little brother is making som moves to make the entrance to the new year:) He is only 5 years old.

Statistics
Place: 194 out of 200
Avg (all users): 3.9524
Avg (commenters): 3.8000
Avg (participants): 3.5094
Avg (non-participants): 4.1019
Views since voting: 624
Views during voting: 283
Votes: 210
Comments: 10
Favorites: 0


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01/30/2007 10:24:21 PM
Interesting pose. Cute outfit. Nice angle. Some minor compression artifacts, but nothing major. Back and white works well and the lines are pretty good. Not sure about the table in the top left though. A few other "minor" distractions, curtain hanger... I actually think the flash hurt you here, or you needed another directional light to remove the hard shadows. Still a fun candid.
01/29/2007 05:06:21 PM
Sorry, I don't see how this relates to Entrance.
01/29/2007 10:34:26 AM
Entrance??
01/28/2007 01:57:57 AM
I'm not sure how this fits the theme.
01/27/2007 02:57:16 AM
If the door behind your bro was open then I feel it would have added emphasis to the "entrance"
01/26/2007 04:59:17 PM
I really like the concept of this image -- the little brother making an entrance on his hands -- but the image didn't capture that for me. Part of it was the technical bits, like focus (which is a bit too soft for me) and lighting (I found the shadows on the left side of his body distracting). Part of it is that it looks more like a handstand than walking; having one of his hands in the air, or with some motion blur on it, would have gotten the concept of him making an "entrance" across to me better.
01/26/2007 09:37:04 AM
This is what I think is off in this photo:
1) Big black spot in the upper right.
2) Foot is cropped out.
3) Flash is harsh
4) More emphasis on the door would have helped your points... To me, an upside down kid does not have anything to do with "Entrance"

I hope that you don't take this the wrong way. I would love for people to leave comments on my pics... I never seem to get any. Good luck.
01/25/2007 10:22:37 AM
This looks like a great invitation, the photo says: come on, enter to my world of joy and fun. Great idea!

Technically, there's still a lot to be done. The choice of angle is a very good one, but I want to see a bit of his face, so that I don't wander looking around and outside of the room and the hanging pictures. A side shot maybe?
01/24/2007 06:58:48 PM
Entrance?
01/24/2007 12:44:32 AM
He's making a grand entrance! 7


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