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Spice Haiku
Spice Haiku
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Challenge: Minimalism II (Minimal Editing I*)
Camera: Canon EOS-30D
Lens: Canon EF 100mm f/2.8 USM Macro
Location: Kitchen
Date: Jan 23, 2007
Aperture: f/16
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/160
Galleries: Abstract, Macro
Date Uploaded: Jan 23, 2007

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Statistics
Place: 143 out of 231
Avg (all users): 5.1860
Avg (commenters): 5.5556
Avg (participants): 4.8554
Avg (non-participants): 5.4944
Views since voting: 811
Views during voting: 260
Votes: 172
Comments: 9
Favorites: 0

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/31/2007 08:20:05 PM
Nicely composed. The berry could have been a bit sharper; sharpness seems to fall off a bit in the bottom third of the image.
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 01/31/2007 02:54:00 PM
Beautiful and imaginative.
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 01/31/2007 01:09:10 AM
Sorry, but it's out of focus and not holding my interest.
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 01/29/2007 06:30:02 PM
Not really sharp, and you have more than one subject which detracts from the composition.
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 01/29/2007 01:00:25 AM
Strictly speaking, the syllable count should be 5-7-5., but I know that when people don't write haiku in Japanese they use a different syllable count. ;-P
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 01/26/2007 08:04:46 PM
Strong colors..
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 01/26/2007 09:44:24 AM
Nice complimentary colors.
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 01/26/2007 08:01:01 AM
"only occupying a very small portion of the image space"
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 01/26/2007 04:32:27 AM
Your focus seems to be on the red rather than the leaf with the droplets. I think you're also a little too close. While technically this is probably minimalism I think it would have more impact if you were to pull back a little to allow the leaf and pod to relax. (If that makes sense, heh)

I think this is definately worth a reshoot. It has the potential to be a very pleasant photograph.
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