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Challenge: Minimalism II (Minimal Editing I*)
Collection: People
Camera: Canon PowerShot S2 IS
Location: Basement
Date: Jan 25, 2007
Aperture: 3.5
ISO: 50
Shutter: 1/25s
Galleries: Family, Emotive
Date Uploaded: Jan 25, 2007

My daughter's eyes and nothing but her eyes. I saw a similar photo elsewhere and wanted to try it. I've got something sort of like it in my self-portraits collection, but there the lighting was flash.

This shot really pushed my abilities, so it was a great learning experience. Knowing I couldn't even crop really forced me to think about composition, DOF, and lighting. I like editing, too, but I look forward to more challenges with these rules!

The setup was my daughter sitting on the floor. I wrapped and pinned the sleeves of my green wool sweater around a ladderback chair to create the slit. I had two lights
1) to image left, even with her eyes, that produced the catchlight and put a little light on the sweater so it wouldn't be pure black
2) one to image right on the floor, with another sweater in front of it to prevent a second catchlight. Got it too close to the light and ended up melting it a little (Daddy, do you smell something burning?).

I was zoomed in about halfway, so the DOF was pretty shallow, which was what I wanted to throw the slit out of focus. And the slit was only about an inch tall, with her eyes a good foot behind it. So the angle was pretty tight, and she had to keep her head in just the right spot. To allow for slight variations in distance between takes, I used focus bracketing to take 3 shots each time: right on the chosen focal distance, a little in front, and a little behind.

I set the timer to a 5 second delay so I wouldn't shake it.

She was very patient; this took 80 shots or so, 3 at a time. We only hit on the idea of her widening her eyes in the last few. It was also tough because the lamp to image left was only about a foot from her face, so it bothered her eyes. Each take was: "Close your eyes," then I'd press the shutter down, then "okay, bug eyes, hold it, hold it, hold it, hold it" and click, click, click.

For editing, I had to choose between "sharpen more" and "sharpen." Although it's allowed, twice with either one was too much. I went with "sharpen more."

Statistics
Place: 102 out of 231
Avg (all users): 5.4913
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 5.3373
Avg (non-participants): 5.6333
Views since voting: 733
Views during voting: 268
Votes: 173
Comments: 10
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02/02/2007 03:06:38 PM
Interesting shot and I like the diagonal. I think the negative space works very well too.
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02/02/2007 12:47:08 PM
Yeah. . .I bet what Juli said. It's a striking photo but maybe the subject is a little too big for minimalism. But it really is a good photo!
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02/02/2007 12:23:40 PM
The eyes are lovely and clear. The image got a respectable score, but probably was hurt by the size of the eyes - taking up a little too much of the image area for minimalism. I think I might like this better if the sweater wasn't visible - just pure black, so it would look like a streak of light in the darkness. It makes me think of a good shot for a scary movie where a kid witnesses something from a hiding place.
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02/02/2007 02:21:42 AM
I wonder how this might have done in black and white (out of the camera obviously for this challenge). It seems to score averagely well, but I wonder if the vividness of it hit against the minimalist theme perhaps?
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/30/2007 05:32:46 PM
ohhhhhhhh!
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01/28/2007 01:50:33 PM
Nice work!
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01/27/2007 03:46:11 PM
I like the values here. For me it would work even better if there were no detail the right portion of the image.
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01/27/2007 04:35:41 AM
I like the angle you used - adds some drama to the photo. Would have been more lifeless if it were straight on.
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01/26/2007 08:12:09 PM
Powerfull.....
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01/26/2007 07:45:19 AM
"only occupying a very small portion of the image space"
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