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02/07/2007 09:29:32 AM |
| I do really like this shot, it has a lovelt feel and I think you have a great model. The only change I would make would be to change the crop so that either the models feet are shown or her legs cropped out altogether.... |
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02/04/2007 05:28:23 PM |
| I like the pose, and it highlights the lovely butterfly tattoo on her shoulder. The facial expression is a bit odd, and feel that the depth of field is a bit wrong. I also do not like the selective coloration of the eyes, intentional or not, it's just feeling slightly unnatural, and even disturbing. |
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02/03/2007 05:37:30 PM |
| Nicely done. Very good composition and exposure. It may be my monitor, but I wish there was a little more texture/detail in the dark area of her hair and that it stood out more from the dark background. Also the way she is resting her cheek on her arm detracts from her otherwise good expression. Wish the eyes weren't purple. |
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02/01/2007 08:42:55 PM |
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02/01/2007 04:55:11 PM |
| nice compo, but the focus seems a bit soft indeed. she also looks a bit bored, but that could be me. |
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02/01/2007 01:49:41 PM |
| Sorry not that keen on the eyes |
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02/01/2007 01:11:51 AM |
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01/31/2007 08:38:38 AM |
| IMHO, a reflector behind the shoot highlighting her hair line would be good, and then darker shadows for the rest of her body would make this a notch better. Still a great photo. |
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01/31/2007 05:12:29 AM |
| good POV, but crop is much too tight all around, light is too flat |
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01/30/2007 01:24:06 PM |
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01/29/2007 08:34:40 PM |
though i don't mind the tinted eyes (very subtle)
i don't like the 'smushed' look of lower eye - it makes the eyes look like they are not tracking correctly |
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01/29/2007 05:43:29 PM |
| I quite like this. It is nice and soft and portrays a nice relaxed feeling. I don't like the crop that the right arm is half in an half out of the image and the feet are cut off. Exposure seems pretty good. |
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01/29/2007 03:21:36 PM |
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01/29/2007 12:45:05 PM |
| she looks so incredibly relaxed! very good. |
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01/29/2007 10:41:21 AM |
| very pretty...love her tatoos |
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01/29/2007 09:16:00 AM |
| Well composed and lit, but the bored expression doesn't work for me |
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01/29/2007 05:14:34 AM |
| it's a shame you chose to edit the eyes like this. |
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01/29/2007 02:52:59 AM |
| Strange color of the eyes |
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01/29/2007 12:16:33 AM |
| cut off legs disconcerting |
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01/29/2007 12:13:28 AM |
| wonderful eye contact and expression. |
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