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11/29/2003 10:14:54 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
This composition is fairly plain with no particular elements of strength. The background seems to be a bit contrasty as well. I think a closer composition that removed the background completely would work best in this case.
This shot is also out of focus. I think that was probably one of two major contributors to the score being on the low side of average. The second contributor is that I believe you missed the theme of the challenge.
Flower photography is something that I hope to get better at. I have been practicing with it and making a few strong photos. It's about like working with any other subject... look for interesting angles and something that is not your normal point of view...
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11/20/2003 09:34:48 AM |
Pretty shot. I'd like it better with enough depth of field for the bottom leaves to be in focus. |
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11/17/2003 09:25:04 PM |
lovely colors. that yellow really glows out of the pink. I like having the green out of focus but I wish all of the flower was sharp. Also a bit more contrast? |
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11/17/2003 11:39:40 AM |
This seems very soft to me without having the mood set by a deliberate soft focus. The colors are good, doesnt appear to have any blown out hightlight, contrast isnt bad, and it nicely fills the frame. I think the major flaw is that it is just not sharp enough and thus loses quite an impact. |
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11/17/2003 10:00:12 AM |
Its out of focus, a little dull and for a flower, its same old same old. Maybe if you used different lighting and took it at an interesting angle |
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