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09/08/2007 11:50:31 AM |
Jeanne: I'm poking around your portfolio, so I'm taking another look at this. I still think it's a nice image, with terrific colors, but I'm trying to figure out why it didn't score higher.
I think it may be the composition. I keep wanting to crop out the upper right corner. I'm not exactly sure how I'd do it, but try this: bring the right edge in to where the tomato on the bottom of the frame touches the bottom on the right. That'll fill the bottom right corner with that terrific red. Then it'll be too tall, so move the bottom and top in until it looks good. |
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02/19/2007 09:22:57 PM |
| Jeannie, this is so attractive. Everything looks so fresh and perfect. The colors are excellent and I like the lighting, composition and DOF. I gave it an 8. |
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02/19/2007 07:48:59 PM |
| Congrats on the new PB!! Very nicely composed, lovely rich colors. Way to go! |
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02/19/2007 10:20:09 AM |
Oh my is right! This is awesome. It is so 3-dimensional. I love that larger than life composition! Can't figure out why it's not way up there at the top either!
But congratulations on achieving a personal best :) I have a feeling it won't be a personal best for very long tho :)
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02/19/2007 08:19:05 AM |
| The detail on the water drops is very nice. Composed well too. Congrats on a personal best. |
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02/19/2007 07:42:03 AM |
Great colours in this.
Congrats on a new personal best ! |
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02/19/2007 07:40:51 AM |
| Yay!!! Congrats on your new PB! I love the bright color combo of the asparagus and tomatoes, and very nice composition. |
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02/19/2007 07:21:03 AM |
congrats on a new hi. i like the colors and the shadows
i get a new all time hi in this entry also, so we can celebrate together |
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02/19/2007 02:15:50 AM |
| Congrats on your new personal best! We can celebrate on Tuesday. :) |
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02/18/2007 04:38:09 PM |
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02/18/2007 03:40:29 PM |
| I love the colors, but it needs a focal point, a little greater dof |
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02/17/2007 06:41:01 AM |
| sorry but I dont see the title fitting the subject, cant see the cabbage, maybe a carrot on the right hand side, but the asparagus tips are well focused |
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02/15/2007 10:21:02 AM |
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02/13/2007 01:09:51 AM |
| I think it will do better with the focus at the asparagus rather than the leaf |
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02/12/2007 12:56:35 PM |
| Nice rich, fresh from the garden look. |
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02/12/2007 10:59:00 AM |
congratulations - this photograph contains a fruit and/or a vegetable, therefore it meets the challenge! well done!
focus seems slightly off, but nice colours! 5! |
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