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Challenge: School Days: Music (Basic Editing) Camera: Nikon D70 Lens: Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 80-400mm f/4.5-5.6D ED VR Location: Providence, RI Date: Feb 9, 2007 Aperture: 5.6 ISO: 200 Shutter: 1/15 sec Galleries: Still Life, Black and White Date Uploaded: Feb 12, 2007
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[thanks to Catherine for letting me kidnap her clarinet for a couple hours]
I'm also a bit torn about whether I should have gone with a little more dof or not, but I decided to go for a really shallow one... the ones with more dof looked a little blah. Also, I shot this intending it to be in color, but in postprocessing I decided it looked nicer in b/w [in color the background is a really pretty dark teal, so if you don't like the b/w, just pretend]. |
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02/24/2007 08:54:14 PM |
You need to shoot it from a different angle. |
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02/19/2007 07:31:46 PM |
I found that a little too much of the photo was out of focus, either that, or I would have preferred a different crop, in which more of the top of the photo is also included. |
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02/16/2007 06:50:28 PM |
That little smattering of fabric detail on the bottom right is fantastic. I love everything about this shot, the shallow DOF, the moody tones, everything just fits together wonderfully. |
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02/14/2007 08:43:41 PM |
could be better if there were more in focus |
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02/14/2007 03:23:15 PM |
Interesting perspective on the clarinet - getting the focus only on the full view open key was a nice touch. With that, my vote is a 6 as I am looking for a story and a connection to 'School Days'. |
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02/14/2007 09:44:03 AM |
I don't think the narrow DOF is necessary here. It distracts from the instrument. |
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