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02/20/2007 03:18:28 AM |
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02/18/2007 03:54:46 PM |
| Even though the lighting needs improvement, I will give you credit for at least trying to make it relate to school days. |
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02/16/2007 12:55:05 PM |
| I get the idea, but it feels like you went a bit overboard with the "MIx" - it's coming across as cluttered IMO. Some bounced fill light would help reduce the shadows some, and just a bit more contrast might help as well. All JMO of course. :D Good luck in the challenge. |
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02/15/2007 09:19:39 AM |
| The set up is pretty good - but I think it just seems so forced with all the stuff in the image - especially wih the individual writing on a piece of paper that is under a book on a page that is already filled up. In addition, the lighting is a little flat - it needs more contrast and better color adjustment to make the apple etc. |
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02/15/2007 08:46:27 AM |
| I like the shot, and the way you have laid it out, but the hand with the pen, looks out of place on a page that looks full, and is half covered with a book. |
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02/15/2007 08:09:34 AM |
| feels like this needs whiter whites - simplifying the composition would work better for voters here too I think |
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