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03/02/2007 11:14:38 AM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, I like the shot and think it has a balanced, stable feeling to it. The perspective of the building makes it have a surreal feeling to it, and that just kind of adds to the feeling of the shot, I think. To see a library that small, and you expect that it should be much larger, so it all seems a bit unreal. The only thing I would suggest is to move your model to the other side of the door frame. That would get her out of the almost exact center of the shot.
Technically, I like the colors, focus, and exposure. The sky is a bit "too much" and is almost too bright to feel real, but it is still pretty.
Overall, it is an interesting shot, and I suspect that it wasn't quite "streety" enough for most people.
Feel free to contact me if I need to further explain or clarify anything.
karmat
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02/28/2007 05:43:22 PM |
THIS is a library?! But its soo tiny! Nice colours and detail :o)
Thanks for your comment on my love shot, really appreciate it :o) |
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02/26/2007 03:26:00 PM |
Maybe not technically "street" but very clever. No signs necessary. Would be an interesting experience to get a look inside. Great find! |
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02/24/2007 10:01:23 AM |
cool!! makes me smile...i love it! |
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02/24/2007 09:50:03 AM |
:) yeah, this is a big library. nice capture! |
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02/23/2007 11:48:51 AM |
Now that's the biggest library I have evah seen :) Gotta be in Godzone! |
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02/23/2007 02:57:08 AM |
nice colors of skay and this has a nice fresh feel to it. Great capture |
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02/23/2007 12:55:45 AM |
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02/19/2007 11:55:53 PM |
7 for making me laugh! :) |
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02/19/2007 03:37:52 PM |
Colors look oversaturated and the whites are overexposed. Does not exactly fit into the Street photography theme also. 4 |
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02/19/2007 02:02:14 AM |
i like. the clouds look a bit too blue tho :) |
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02/19/2007 01:03:29 AM |
hey this is just passed Orewa aint it g8 shot |
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