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03/05/2007 06:33:47 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Composition: Nothing wrong with the composition here.
Technical: The commenters have hit the nail on the head. The lighting is a bit dark overall. It is hard to get closeups of eyes done well. From your notes I gather than you wanted this dark look. The trouble is that while it does accentuate the words in the eye, it also makes the details of the eyelash and the rest of the eye harder to see and thus it feels like there is a problem. The word "hate" is nicely lit for the most part but there is a hot spot on the "T" which also detracts from the overall feel. Is that a hot pixel at the top of the eye or some stray light. Hot pixels you can close out in basic rules but just make sure thats what it is :)
My Feelings: Good fit for the challenge but the lighting is what cost in the score department. One of the better "reflections in the eyes" ideas for challenges for a while.
PM me if you have any questions. |
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02/23/2007 11:49:39 PM |
well I was going to say 'urg another closeup of an eye', but thats kinda neat.
could do with better focus. |
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02/23/2007 10:58:50 AM |
| i like the way this looks far away, nice effect. the lighting is decent, but it's a little too dark. |
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02/22/2007 11:43:06 AM |
| The lighting is sort of harsh, but good idea! |
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02/22/2007 06:32:10 AM |
| Very clever - Well thought up. |
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02/21/2007 02:05:33 PM |
| one) the eyes to dark two) how could you get that hate in there? |
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02/21/2007 12:10:11 PM |
| nice idea i like the concept |
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02/21/2007 12:10:01 PM |
| Although this is an interesting idea, the lighting isn't very good. I'm not a big fan. |
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02/21/2007 12:07:23 PM |
| I dont really like the lighting of this image i wish that it was a little more clear. But good idea. |
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