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03/04/2007 04:47:30 AM |
Hi, Greetings from the Critique Club:
Composition: Oh now this is just plain cute. The bright pink against the black works well and how the pig seems to be reaching for the viewer really draws the viewer in more. Well done on that little aspect. I do feel however if you cropped a portion off the right hand side of the image it would have a more even balance. Also maybe another human touch would have helped your score...maybe a small single rose lying in front of the pig...sort of like an offering.
Technical: There isn't much I can say here except to watch in future shoots for marks on the pig...like on his belly. I know, being a Basic Editing you couldn't do anything about that...but do watch small details like that as it does have an effect on your score. Also maybe a small reflector on the pigs right hand side to lift some of those shadows on his leg would also have helped the image.
Overall: Now, after reading this, you might think I am being picky, but I wouldn't be doing my job if I wasn't. It wouldn't help you by saying this image is perfect and yet it came in at 144th place. So I am telling you the good and bad of the image to help you with future scores. I think you have done a great job and with a few details considered, your work will do well in future shoots. |
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02/27/2007 01:51:33 AM |
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02/23/2007 02:53:17 PM |
| Can imagine him breaking into a Barry White tune now.... |
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02/23/2007 09:32:33 AM |
| Cute piggie... not sure that I get a feeling of love from this guy, but I like the way he's 'looking' at the camera. Nicely done in the technical aspects. |
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02/23/2007 09:29:33 AM |
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02/21/2007 01:53:15 PM |
| Not sure about the 'Love' theme. |
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02/21/2007 03:33:14 AM |
is the pigs name babe?
or are you calling me babe? |
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02/21/2007 01:39:03 AM |
| Stuffed Animals usually don't score well from me, but this one is an exception, Look at those eyes....hehe, What Feeling! The title sold me! |
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