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03/04/2007 01:27:39 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: My eyes are immediately drawn to the catchlights in the child's eyes, which is initially a good thing, but the catch lights give the image an overall out-of-focus feeling, as do the other highlights on the image. This may have been a result of your post-processing. I have found, through much trial and more error, that a better result is usually yielded by running Neat Image before any sharpening is done. I'd also like to see a little more contrast to the image.
Lighting: Nicely lit, but I'd like to see the entire catch light in the child's right eye instead of it bleeding to the edge of his eyelid. I do like your use of lighting to isolate the child from the mother, thus making him the emphasized subject.
Composition/Content: I believe that your composition would be stronger if you had left his ear in the frame or either cropped a little closer to his eye.
My Opinion: Excellent job meeting the challenge. I definitely get a feeling of love as soon as the image loads. I think with more crisp focus and a little more contrast, this one would have finished even better.
Eric
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02/27/2007 10:37:57 PM |
very soft image, well composed, the lighting adds to the effects |
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02/27/2007 02:09:59 PM |
Oh, this is wonderful! Great shot! |
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02/27/2007 10:08:54 AM |
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02/24/2007 09:09:00 PM |
Absolutely great moment captured! |
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02/23/2007 08:53:59 AM |
beautiful... nothing more to add... everthing is there... |
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02/22/2007 02:25:47 PM |
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02/21/2007 09:28:12 PM |
Too sweet. Great moment captured. |
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02/21/2007 02:00:55 PM |
I think it would get a higher score if the baby was a little more in focus. All your attention starts there and I think it should be the 'crispest' (I'm not even sure that's a word) part of the photo. Still giving high vote. |
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02/21/2007 10:57:12 AM |
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