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11/27/2003 04:02:42 AM |
Good morning from the critique club.
Nice setting impeccably composed with strong lines, rhythm and good textures.
Unfortunately, I think the young person and his shade do break that strong rhythm in the middle of this scene.
I would have suggested to move your character slightly to the left of the composition where light and shade meet. Or maybe having him sit on this window opening.
Also, having your main subject a little less visible would have been an enhancement meaning wise.
Good photographic work,
All the best, JJ
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11/23/2003 05:51:16 AM |
| Lovely composition and well shot. Interesting subject matter and good texture, light and detail. |
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11/18/2003 02:32:42 PM |
| I like the feeling this portrays. The angle at which you shot this definitely adds to that mood. Very nicely done! |
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11/18/2003 06:27:57 AM |
| Nailed it, absolutely. Great dark, indutrial kind of photo. |
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11/17/2003 02:43:01 PM |
| Nice dramatic scene and good use of contrast for drama. |
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11/17/2003 11:25:31 AM |
| Nice, beautiful shot, I like it!!! |
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11/17/2003 10:47:58 AM |
| 'cool' shot! ;o) It conveys great atmosphere and fits the title! good work |
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11/17/2003 04:19:16 AM |
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11/17/2003 01:48:43 AM |
| This interesting, the way you captured and cropped this really adds alot to this shot, I like the height aspect. good job |
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