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03/14/2007 08:30:56 PM |
| I like the black and white. And this will probably sound dumb, but the thing that really caught my eye is the perspective of the brick wall there on the right. Like it is ready to come out of the picture. I like that. |
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03/14/2007 02:50:38 PM |
| a nice shot. ocntrast needs to be upped - a little underexposed, i think i'd also have zoomed in a little more, there's an awful lot of space that's not doing anything. unless you make the space a point of the image with the processing |
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03/13/2007 02:32:12 PM |
| needs more contrast but nice image for min, I dont know what else maybe a little straiting but thats all. |
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03/13/2007 02:12:30 PM |
| I like the idea of this a lot. I'd first tilt it to the right about 1 or two degrees. Then the bricks on the right would be "even." I'd work with levels (particularlu midtones) and possibly selective neutrals and try removing some of the black and you mid have a touch less of the under exposed sense of it. Some filters (virtual photographer) might be able to help out with this endeavor and still keep the integrity of the shot. Keep up the work. You're getting there. |
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03/13/2007 02:08:30 PM |
| This is quite dramatic and I love the pov. Yes, its a little dark, but with curves/levels and some dodgeing/burning it should work very well. |
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03/12/2007 08:32:19 PM |
| Awesome shot! Pretty model. A little underexposed but not much. Nice job |
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03/12/2007 12:43:23 PM |
| Great lines and textures! Very good composition. I look forward to seeing how you choose to edit this. |
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03/12/2007 10:42:32 AM |
| This is great! You really have a lot to work with - very well composed image. It does look a little over-sharpened to me - and maybe you can do that cool perspective correction that some people know in PS? (I don't have a clue how to do it.) I love the textures, BTW. Great choice of location. |
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03/12/2007 09:56:04 AM |
| Although a little underexposed, I love teh composition and lines in this image. A little PP will do wonders with this. I would think a little more light on the model and a little dodge/burn on some of the neat details of this alley (especially the brick wall and the steel wall) would make this shine. |
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03/12/2007 09:25:55 AM |
| Very nice composition. A little dark |
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03/12/2007 08:26:02 AM |
i like the composition... nice perspective... a little more light on the model would have made this 'pop'. maybe an off-camera light, a remote flash, a reflector to get some sunlight on there?
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03/12/2007 05:29:42 AM |
| great shot ... great composition ... and gorgeous model!!! |
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03/12/2007 02:54:27 AM |
| Her dress is gorgeous :) I would single her out more and make that dress really pop. It would be a fashion shot then and her pose would make more sense (fashion models do strange things to make the clothes look good). Overall, a lovely shot :) |
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03/12/2007 02:28:24 AM |
I like this... great location, b/w works for this spot, beautiful model in a dress that lends to the feeling.
The only contrary thought that popped in my head was, "She does not look comfortable standing like that." |
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