| Author | Thread |
|
|
05/26/2007 09:42:36 PM |
|
|
|
03/26/2007 05:02:06 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
I really like this shot. I didn't vote but if I had it would have scored well from me.
Composition: While the subject is in the center of the frame, her arm bending backwards pulls her into the left half of the frame. The cutoff elbow, I'm not so sure about.
Technical: The lighting from the window sure seems overblown. I think it works and it also adds a lot of depth to the image in that we start to wonder what she is looking at as it is in such a bright void. The bright light pulls our eyes to the models face and to a lesser extent, her breasts. You've added a lot of grain to the image but I guess that's what the challenge was about. I'd like to have seen a bit more contrast in the B&W conversion as your model seems to merge in with the background a bit much.
Feel: As I said, I like it. There's a sense of mystery in the image. |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
03/18/2007 01:25:52 PM |
| Don't think the grain improves this image and the whole thing appears washed out. I think it needs a little more contrast. |
|
|
|
03/18/2007 06:31:47 AM |
| too centered to realize its full potential. either more behind or in front to help tell her story: is she trapped, shy, longing to go outside but afraid to, unable to. or is she simply day-dreaming? lots of possibilities here, just need to work on the composition. |
|
|
|
03/14/2007 01:54:09 AM |
| Very '60's feel about this. Lovey |
|
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 03/15/2025 10:15:33 AM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
