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04/03/2007 09:06:36 PM |
*** Critique Club ***
First impression: Strong landscape
Composition: I like the high position of the peaks but feel that there is too much in the foreground. Including a little more of the sky and a little less grass I think would work better. Also, because of the direction the girl is walking, I think it would have been better if she was walking into the frame rather than out of it.
Exposure: Seems right in most places though some parts of the cliff and the sand along the path seems a bit bright.
Impact: The strength of the cliffs is where I feel the impact of the image is coming from. I think more impact could be obtained by not cropping so close to the peak on the left. A lower angle may add to the impact as well.
Remember, this is just one opinion.
Colette |
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03/27/2007 10:00:05 PM |
| I'm not really fond of people walking out of there photos, but I think the caption saves you (at least with my interpretation of it). |
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03/25/2007 07:46:47 PM |
| Maybe she's taking a photo? |
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03/24/2007 02:07:43 AM |
love the idea. The pic doesn't quite pull it off for me, and I'm not sure why.
If you'd had the chance to take this when the subject was on the right hand side of the frame, with a slightly less cluttered background immediately behind them? |
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03/23/2007 03:04:28 PM |
Location? Looks like parts of southern Utah.
Good story here, someone oblivious to the beauty around them. Highlight on the cliff seems blown, but makes an interesting contrast to the person in black in the opposite corner. |
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03/22/2007 11:08:40 PM |
| Your main picture is the mountian in the back and the title has nothing to do with a phone. I think you have it backwards. You should have focused in on the phone and let the background be out of focus. |
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03/22/2007 05:30:21 PM |
| Sad but true how many times I've found myself in this position |
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03/22/2007 10:56:38 AM |
| coming. nice idea.. i like the location and where the person on the cell phone is. good job. |
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03/21/2007 11:46:49 PM |
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03/21/2007 10:46:34 PM |
| The cellphone is lost to the great background. |
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03/21/2007 11:37:33 AM |
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