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04/18/2007 03:31:18 PM |
As an American and photographer I am always interested in both your photography and your outlook as a Jordanian from the Middle East because of the current political suituation betweeen Christian Americans and Moslem Jordanians. I find it interesting that your subject demanded both pay and additionl work from you to take the picture. I've paid homeless people in the USA to take their photographs before to and understand. :)
Positives:
Overall the image is good, particularly your capture of sparks. Your image and capture well displays what you are trying to convey regarding your subject. You relate to your subject and that comes out in the composition.
Technicals:
Your subject is slightly oversharpened as shown in the digital 'hash' marks in his glasses on MY monitor. Your main subject's face looks underexposed and and red color casted to me. :(
The Challenge:
Your image meets the challenge. Technical photographic issues affected this image and it's score negatively moreso than anything else.
Suggestions:
Adjust for the red color cast, specifically as related to your subject's face. Overall your image is slightly underexposed and that should be corrected. These small details can make all the difference in the world in how a DPC image is scored.
Message edited by author 2007-04-18 15:32:42. |
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Comments Made During the Challenge  |
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04/02/2007 10:31:43 PM |
i like the idea,it is very in focus, and i like the orange sparks! |
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04/02/2007 11:29:37 AM |
This frightens me, but I love it. |
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03/30/2007 12:24:58 AM |
great shot, awesome sparks! maybe try it in black in white? stuff in background a little distracting |
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03/28/2007 07:19:08 PM |
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