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04/17/2007 12:44:48 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUE CRITIQUE
by karmat
Interesting approach to the challenge.
Compositionally, I find this to be very static. It is 'flat' horizontally, and it is centered. While this can be effective in some situations, I think in this one, it is just "there" and doesn't add interest, context, or anything to compel the viewer to keep looking at it. I think perhaps turning it on a diagonal so that it "starts" in one corner and leads to the other would help a little bit. Also, if it filled up more of the frame, it might be a bit more interesting.
Technically, it is a very crisp image. The white background is very clean and clear of distractions. The colors are okay and the focus seems okay as well. To me, it seems to have the "edginess" that says "overprocessed" for whatever reason.
I applaud your willingness to approach the challenge from a different perspective. Eating healthy is definitely part of it.
If I need to further clarify or explain anything, please let me know.
karmat |
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04/10/2007 04:46:15 PM |
| Nice idea but I don't really see how it's "fitness", maybe if it was "healthy". |
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04/10/2007 08:58:01 AM |
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04/09/2007 01:52:37 PM |
| Well, it is definitely out of th box. Image itself is badly exposed, and I think saturation may have been adjusted too much. |
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04/09/2007 01:48:03 PM |
| this doesn't really speak 'fitness' to me ... |
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04/09/2007 01:00:54 PM |
| being fit is not the same as being healthy. takes much more to be fit. |
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04/09/2007 01:08:16 AM |
| like the colors. fitness tho? |
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04/07/2007 11:42:29 AM |
| Lighting is far to harsh for me. |
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04/06/2007 01:45:05 PM |
| very simple, yet powerful... love it |
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04/06/2007 09:45:55 AM |
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04/06/2007 06:46:00 AM |
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04/05/2007 01:26:05 PM |
Does not fit challenge at all
And lighting is way too bright. |
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04/05/2007 11:52:03 AM |
| I think most people consider fitness to mainly include physical activity, but I guess eating healthy keeps one fit as well. I like the simplicity and clarity of it, but there's something about it that makes it look over-edited. A little too yellow on the stems and a little too indigo on the shadows. I guess maybe that isn't your fault. It's quite nice. |
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04/05/2007 06:39:48 AM |
| Interesting picture, but a bit too overprocessed |
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04/05/2007 03:13:18 AM |
| Don't know why but this shot appeals to me, maybe because it's out of the box and different from anyone else? Still like it! |
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04/05/2007 01:49:30 AM |
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04/04/2007 09:21:20 AM |
| Seems over-processed/saturated. |
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