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04/22/2007 09:09:14 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, this is a strong image in that it pulls the eyes diagonally through the image.
Technically, it is also very well done. I'm going to disagree with stdavidson about the sharpening. From where I'm sitting, it does not look oversharpened. Granted, I'm not on the best monitors around, but it just looks nice and crisp to me.
I suspect your score took a hit because it was "just" a picture of a chain. There were several in the challenge (mine included) and I think people wanted more of an emotional impact made with the chain. "Plain" shots did not offer this, though you did get a lot of 6s and up based on your technical merit.
Nice work, though. If I need to further clarify or explain myself, please feel free to contact me.
karma |
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04/18/2007 02:42:43 PM |
Positives:
Certain technical features work well with this image. The diagonal composition, general color and depth of field are good.
Technicals:
As I said... DOF, color and diagonal composition are good. It is slightly oversharpened and that negatively affected voting. That is a critical feature of this particular image.
The Challenge:
Yes, it meets the challenge and the coloring on the chain also works well, but viewers sometimes want more in a 'chain' composition than what they see in yours and the sharpening issue affected their evaluation.
Suggestions:
Back off on the overall sharpening of the image, but not a lot... whatever that means. :) In technical terms if you duplicate a flattened image layer and apply sharpening to the duplicated layer and then adjust the opacity of the sharpening layer to make it 'correct' is a good approach to take. Outside chosing a different composition or subject, that is about the only thing you can do to improve this composition. |
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Comments Made During the Challenge  |
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04/15/2007 10:18:12 AM |
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04/14/2007 08:27:10 AM |
| wonderful bokeh to bring out the sharp focus and crispness on the chain |
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04/09/2007 07:58:11 PM |
| Good DOP and soft lighting. 8 |
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04/09/2007 03:21:40 AM |
| nice detail & bokeh. overall dull shot though. 6 |
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