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04/17/2007 04:48:11 AM |
| Maybe you should have been closer to the girl on the bike - so you can see her expression more. |
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04/16/2007 11:23:47 AM |
| Very cute. I love the shadows in the background as well. |
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04/15/2007 12:49:18 PM |
| Perhaps nitpicky, but I'd put the negative space in front of her; the direction of the bike leads your eye out of the picture to the left. Otherwise a great shot, very cute. |
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04/14/2007 10:19:51 PM |
| at play among the shadows, the fearless girl runs over the intersection of your dream. 10 |
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04/14/2007 02:45:54 AM |
| Good BW: subject stands out against background; wonder if a closer crop, leaving out the upper cross line and the righthand third wouldn't make this more effective even at the expense of the nice tree shadow - think you would still get the feel of the tree shadows which is what brings this out of the ordinary. |
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04/14/2007 01:54:39 AM |
Your daughter is so sweet, one more excellent image with her and her bicycle.
Very good composition. 9 |
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04/13/2007 03:44:11 PM |
| shee seems to have fun.. good capture |
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04/13/2007 12:36:58 PM |
A sweet shot.
Technically the shot would be stronger if there were not quite so many strong lines in the background which tend to distract, and if the little girl was on the right cycling 'into' the picture, instead of cycling out of it. I do like the shadow of the trees though and you have a very pretty model there so I am sure you can get plenty more pictures of her. |
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04/13/2007 06:45:56 AM |
| The subject is very nice, the composition good, I only don't like the shadows |
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04/13/2007 01:43:42 AM |
| Shadows are a nice part of the composition. |
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04/12/2007 09:11:49 AM |
| I think that this would be stronger if you'd cropped out a lot of the right side ... b/w conversion seems to be lacking contrast especially in the street and wall ... |
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04/12/2007 03:42:06 AM |
| IMHO i think it would have worked better with your cyclist ;-) on the righthand side traveling into the space to the left. Works well in B&W with the shadows behind. |
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04/11/2007 11:55:02 AM |
| aww look at the little girl |
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04/11/2007 11:09:00 AM |
| this is a very swwet pic lol i like the little girl on the ride |
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