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04/29/2007 07:21:39 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, you have helped this shot be stronger by having the two halves of the shot have contrasting light and dark. If the background had been consistent, I think this shot would have a static feeling because of the "centeredness" of the caterpillar. I also like how it looks like he (she?) is looking off of the leave. That makes it seem like there is something interesting down there that we want to see. I agree with your comments that a different crop would be even more effective (though not for the challenge).
Technically, you have nailed the exposure, focus, etc. I also think the shallow dof works on this. This is a very well done shot, especially considering the post processing limitations of the challenge.
Very nicely done, and I'm not sure I can suggest anything to make it 'better.' Good work.
If I need to clarify or explain myself, please feel free to contact me via pm.
Karma
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04/22/2007 11:41:35 PM |
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04/22/2007 07:41:53 PM |
Great subject and really interesting pose. |
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04/22/2007 01:15:46 PM |
Great picture, fun title. Hairy little fella isn't he :) |
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04/22/2007 06:35:56 AM |
The colors are excellent. |
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04/21/2007 10:53:41 PM |
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04/21/2007 01:11:15 PM |
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04/20/2007 11:25:41 PM |
Looks like a good set of stingers there! :) |
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04/19/2007 09:09:25 AM |
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04/17/2007 11:04:35 PM |
Not sure if this counts as an insect, but I didn't hold that against you. Excellent depth of field; the bug is very sharp and the blurred areas don't distract me from him. |
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04/17/2007 11:03:24 PM |
wow...this is sharp! Nice going! |
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04/16/2007 01:30:36 PM |
Odd title but a good photo. I like the colour and detail |
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04/16/2007 12:29:40 PM |
hehe, what a fun furry guy! Great shot of him. |
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04/16/2007 10:42:28 AM |
Whoa! This is AWESOME! Congratulations! |
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04/16/2007 10:00:20 AM |
So that is what I shot! I shot this same little booger last week for this challenge and didn't know what it was! I was afraid to submit it for fear of DNMC votes (I know it will eventually be an insect but you know the voters...) - Mine was a good subject and didn't move any, hope yours was too! - 8 |
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04/16/2007 03:36:49 AM |
Haha awesoem my fave so far 10 |
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04/16/2007 01:33:06 AM |
Looks like a fishing lure! :) Nice job! 9 |
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