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04/30/2007 12:13:34 AM |
I really like this, except I'd like the light from the other side so that the one in focus was more clearly lit :) I'm a sucker for this kind of focus and DOF. |
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04/29/2007 10:42:29 PM |
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04/29/2007 10:47:59 AM |
This is a good idea and like very much the shapes you created with the composition, but would have preferred to see the focus extend a bit farther back in the shot. |
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04/29/2007 10:47:38 AM |
could have been a 10 for me, with better DOF with all forks in clear focus. |
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04/29/2007 06:53:41 AM |
Great presentation and DOF |
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04/28/2007 10:33:55 AM |
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04/26/2007 09:56:52 PM |
Nice use of depth of field. Very clean composition |
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04/26/2007 12:38:57 AM |
Perhaps you still have tax season on your mind ... : ) |
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04/25/2007 06:04:52 PM |
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04/25/2007 12:27:51 PM |
nice idea, IMO i would have used a lower more straight on angle, and use a larger DoF to get more in focus, its hard because the one thats focused on is lost in some shadow compared to the other ones that are lit up more. and a nice metallic surface would of helped as well. |
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04/25/2007 11:30:30 AM |
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04/24/2007 02:24:21 PM |
I'd have liked this even better without the knobbly green background. Good luck though. |
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04/23/2007 06:20:08 PM |
A little dark but a great idea, and no food in site, yay. |
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04/23/2007 11:13:05 AM |
I like the idea, but the focus is too soft. I think if you tightened the crop a bit on the top and bottom, it'd make the line of forks appear endless; the gap in the upper right is a bit distracting. |
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04/23/2007 08:10:11 AM |
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04/23/2007 05:00:29 AM |
Good DOF lighting could be a bit better |
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04/23/2007 03:31:20 AM |
"your task is to shoot the stuff you use to PREPARE your food!
besides that, the shot is too dark and the angle you have taken it from in combination with the pattern of the cloth and the unusual aspect ratio produces different vanishing points which is somehow irritating |
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04/23/2007 02:50:40 AM |
this image has a lot of initial bang -- i thought "woo cool!" when i first clicked. but there are subtle asymmetries and misalignments in the composition that kind of throw it off for me. it's a really challenging concept to execute because it has to be *absolutely perfect*. i dig the tonal range though, and the simple silver-on-green. nice image. |
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