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05/05/2007 07:59:04 AM |
Originally posted by MattO:
Greetings from the critique club. FIrst off let me say this is a nice idea from the challenge stand point. I like the many bubbles and the negative space. My biggest concern with this shot is the lack of focus. I can see the bubble to the left almost in focus, just a touch off, but the shallow DOF and the lack of overall focus takes away from the shot. User a larger number Fstop will get deeper DOF and more in focus. Good luck in future challenges.
MattO |
Thank you MattO for you input. Many viewers expressed the same opinions and consequently can strive for an image with greater clarity, sharpness.
Really have so much to learn here.. Am still excited especially since u where kind enuf to point out something good it helps..
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05/05/2007 12:29:16 AM |
Greetings from the critique club. FIrst off let me say this is a nice idea from the challenge stand point. I like the many bubbles and the negative space. My biggest concern with this shot is the lack of focus. I can see the bubble to the left almost in focus, just a touch off, but the shallow DOF and the lack of overall focus takes away from the shot. User a larger number Fstop will get deeper DOF and more in focus. Good luck in future challenges.
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05/03/2007 09:58:19 PM |
| I think if these were in focus this pic would have done really well because the colors are gorgeous! |
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04/30/2007 12:04:18 PM |
| This would be so awesome if the bubbles were in focus!!! I love the vibrant colors against the black background. Good try! |
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04/30/2007 10:52:12 AM |
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04/29/2007 09:40:26 PM |
| I really like the simplicity of this. If it was sharper I would have given it a better score. |
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04/28/2007 07:46:00 AM |
| nice colors, but a little unsharp... |
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04/27/2007 11:47:55 PM |
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04/27/2007 10:03:20 PM |
| Love the colors of the bubbles! |
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04/26/2007 11:22:22 PM |
| Could have been good, if the image had better focus. |
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04/26/2007 07:51:13 PM |
| I like it, but unfortunately it's out of focus and the contrast is poor (the background would look better completely black). The bubble-part in the lower left corner also bugges me. |
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04/26/2007 03:36:59 PM |
| very nice colors! like the bubbles flying around! Well done! |
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04/26/2007 08:29:56 AM |
| Love the idea and composition but the bubbles are too out of focus. Still one of my favourites though. Well done |
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04/26/2007 08:28:37 AM |
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04/25/2007 07:58:01 PM |
| The black background and sharp focus, combined with the indistinct refelections and bright colors makes this an excellent shot. |
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04/25/2007 06:24:46 PM |
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04/25/2007 03:39:47 PM |
| I love the colors of the bubbles & their clairty. I like how they fill the whole page without "overdoing" it. I think this is nicely composed also, maybe one or two more, placed in the upper right corner would have filled it out nicely! |
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04/25/2007 01:30:12 PM |
| nice colors on the bubbles! but I don't know if it's me or it is a little bit out of focus |
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04/25/2007 11:40:32 AM |
| Shaky/blurry, but quite good for being so simple. I also like the dark background very much. |
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04/25/2007 11:30:23 AM |
| i like how the bubbles are floating through the air but i mean like whats in the bubbles its kind of distracting |
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04/25/2007 08:36:04 AM |
| Good idea and like the arrangement but it looks slightly out of focus |
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04/25/2007 08:20:34 AM |
| Like the colors, but image is too oof. One trick I learned is to use manual focus, then focus on one area, blow bubbles and when they get to the focus point, I snap the pic. Continuous focus and shutter release also works relatively well. |
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04/25/2007 03:59:27 AM |
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